Nakedman's new shtuff.

[nakedman]

Hello to my fav online forum! Here are two of my newest compositions. One being kind of a joke, and the other more my normal style.

This song is very Danny Elfman influenced. https://soundcloud.com/shawnees-dreams/horseman
Here is the more normal song https://soundcloud.com/shawnees-dreams/a

I am looking for some good criticism. I am drummer normally, but I have been trying my hand at singing/songwriting.
Thanks in advance.

[orcus116]

I think the electronic style actually worked for you, as most time it can sound cheesy. It had a very low-key Maps sound to it.