share your stream of consciousness poetry

dethklok09 · May 06, 2011, 07:07:06 PM

My first ever so don't expect much

slowly breathing
looking towards the window
A man walks by
cars seem to fly everywhere
A baby seems to be in the back seat
I am not sure where they are going
out westward it seems.
The trees are growing taller
I ponder on how I relate.
quietly a man turns his head
The car is still moving.

I know there is a poetry thread but I think this style would be cool to see a focus on.

sonatafanica · May 06, 2011, 08:02:50 PM

so just, like, whatever I'm thinking?

what the fuck, here goes

haha, twizzlers
they're, like
flavorless rubber
except good somehow
I wonder who made the first licorice
it was probably the black kind though
and that's gross
tastes like
well
...
flavorless rubber
except without the good
all salty and shit
uck
YUCK
FUCK
that

JayOctavarium · May 06, 2011, 08:17:38 PM

well hell i just posted my thoughts in the poetry thread

ZBomber · May 06, 2011, 08:22:18 PM

haha oh man is this the thread for me right now

Needles
Needles
Sowing the path
Needles
Crack at the dawn's emerging gap
Green buried beneath a winter scene
Icicles stirring beneath a dream
Mountains as tall as the Alaskan sky
Beneath the dreary ever seeing eye

Jirpo · May 06, 2011, 08:23:30 PM

Quote from: ZBomber on May 06, 2011, 08:22:18 PM
haha oh man is this the thread for me right now

Needles
Needles
Sowing the path
Needles
Crack at the dawn's emerging gap
Green buried beneath a winter scene
Icicles stirring beneath a dream
Mountains as tall as the Alaskan sky
Beneath the dreary ever seeing eye

This is pretty good!

ZBomber · May 06, 2011, 08:30:22 PM

im just reallly

uh

Well, yeah, I'm not entirely here at the moment, let's put it that way.

JayOctavarium · May 06, 2011, 08:38:39 PM

Sitting in the dark
alone as she sleeps
my mind wanders in the dark
and my eyes want to weep
there are so many things on my mind
so many feelings im leaving behind
so much pain in my head
too much pain to be said
New life and new beginnings unfold
it's up to me to... am I this bold?
I made the decision to not walk away
but is it wrong of me to stay?
I'll learn to live with this new life
and deal with this strife

Its not over
its not over.
is it over?

Gadough · May 06, 2011, 08:46:00 PM

Quote from: ZBomber on May 06, 2011, 08:30:22 PM
im just reallly

uh

Well, yeah, I'm not entirely here at the moment, let's put it that way.

He's blazed out of his mind, in case anyone doesn't get it.

Ravenheart · May 06, 2011, 10:44:44 PM

I thought me meant his schizophrenia has the best of him at the moment.

Portrucci · May 06, 2011, 10:59:33 PM

life is like a script
and each person is a writer
each is given their lines and their role
a lover or a fighter

scenes can be changed along the way
there are no warm-ups, no rest all day
the greatest men have shown
what we've all secretely known

so many actors, and not enough spaces
not enough time, so many blank faces

so futile is emotion, so inxtoicating it's effect
where hearing the truth is our most feared prospect

the absurdity of life, gets harder to digest
one you realize you're no wiser than the rest

the god of the sky, laughs all the while
the wars, the whores and the toil make him smile
we've all been played for fools and sold up the river
left to grow old, confused and withered

indeed life is like a script
and each is given their lines
too bad no-ones realized
it was a comedy all the while

ThroughHerEyesDude6 · May 06, 2011, 11:16:03 PM

Light of a northern praise
the gaze, so soft
aloft the musical prose
I arose the grand staircase to hell
bent on revival
Naught to left behind in talisman circles
Encircling the view to Fairview
Fairly obvious something's wrong
Down the narrow straightaway
Nigh is the Time of the Century
Be with me.

ZBomber · May 07, 2011, 12:39:04 AM

Quote from: Gadough on May 06, 2011, 08:46:00 PM
Quote from: ZBomber on May 06, 2011, 08:30:22 PM
im just reallly

uh

Well, yeah, I'm not entirely here at the moment, let's put it that way.

He's blazed out of his mind, in case anyone doesn't get it.

More than that now, actually, but I won't get into it.

AcidLameLTE · May 07, 2011, 07:14:04 AM

Give me some bread
I want some bread
Where's the bread?
I just wanted one Pepsi
But my mum wouldn't give me it
I just wanted one Pepsi
Just one Pepsi
But my mum wouldn't give me one
I JUST WANTED ONE PEPSI
I'm not crazy
INSTITUTIONALIZED
You're the one that's crazy
INSTITUTIONALIZED
You're driving me crazy
INSTITUTIONALIZED

ZBomber · May 07, 2011, 07:35:01 AM

Hey Harry
You're a

stupid face
pass the remote
I'm hungry
The end

Kosmo · May 07, 2011, 07:41:30 AM

This one is called The Struggle of Seamus and the Alley Cats

Seamus
he lives in
a box, alone
can of soup
shrimp flavored
i believe..
oh look! it's a cat
what a funny cat he is
dancing and twirling
---
dancing and twirling
THUNDER AND LIGHTNING
oh no
cried Seamus.
it was probably nothing
---
oh how the cat dances
majestic, one would say.
but still
it's just a cat
who was born in May.

sonatafanica · May 07, 2011, 07:46:59 AM

Pet Teh Kitteh

Kitteh
I see u thar watchin' me
pretteh
is wat u look lyk to me

and it's teh myddl of teh nite
and I can't contrl mysef
and I know that it's not right
but I gots to dress u up lyk an elf!

PET TEH KITTEH!
PET TEH KITTEH!
LYF'S NOT SHITTEH
WHEN U PET TEH KITTEH!

Kitteh
my luv to u is not a lie
sitteh
on teh cieling kitteh sky

and teh walls r closin' in
and teh doors r slammin' shut
and ur eyes, they beam me in
and I want to rub ur butt!

PET TEH KITTEH!
PET TEH KITTEH!
LYF'S NOT SHITTEH
WHEN U PET TEH KITTEH!

PET TEH KITTEH!
PET TEH KITTEH!
LYF'S NOT SHITTEH
WHEN U PET TEH KITTEH!

Kosmo · May 07, 2011, 08:02:31 AM

A dragon named Jeremy

all dragons are green
but one
Jeremy that is
he's teal
ridiculed
a single tear
rolls down his cheek

others spit fire
but he spits
liquid
whatever it is

it's Wednesday
wake up Jeremy
wake up
it's alright
you're just like the rest
you were just picked from the wrong nest

MajorMatt · May 07, 2011, 08:20:44 AM

Quote from: sonatafanica on May 07, 2011, 07:46:59 AM
Pet Teh Kitteh

Kitteh
I see u thar watchin' me
pretteh
is wat u look lyk to me

and it's teh myddl of teh nite
and I can't contrl mysef
and I know that it's not right
but I gots to dress u up lyk an elf!

PET TEH KITTEH!
PET TEH KITTEH!
LYF'S NOT SHITTEH
WHEN U PET TEH KITTEH!

Kitteh
my luv to u is not a lie
sitteh
on teh cieling kitteh sky

and teh walls r closin' in
and teh doors r slammin' shut
and ur eyes, they beam me in
and I want to rub ur butt!

PET TEH KITTEH!
PET TEH KITTEH!
LYF'S NOT SHITTEH
WHEN U PET TEH KITTEH!

PET TEH KITTEH!
PET TEH KITTEH!
LYF'S NOT SHITTEH
WHEN U PET TEH KITTEH!

Super Dude · May 07, 2011, 08:31:29 AM

Sure, let me go listen to SC and then I'll get back to you.

ClairvoyantCat · May 07, 2011, 11:47:01 AM

Ryan, won't you send a song
So my roulette can just move on along
I'm not going to lie, I fucking hate this game
Almost as much as my DTF username
and I want to get it done and out of my way
But you're holding it up, and that's kind of gay
Ryan, send me a song

you fucking shoe

robwebster · May 07, 2011, 12:00:23 PM

Diglett, dig.
Diglett, dig.
Trio.
Trio.

...trio.

skydivingninja · May 07, 2011, 01:48:36 PM

Chris and Rob just won the thread.

alirocker08 · May 07, 2011, 02:05:49 PM

Exam on Monday
German, why do I listen
to music. Oh shit.

Gadough · May 07, 2011, 03:13:11 PM

Quote from: dtismajesty on May 07, 2011, 11:47:01 AM
Ryan, won't you send a song
So my roulette can just move on along
I'm not going to lie, I fucking hate this game
Almost as much as my DTF username
and I want to get it done and out of my way
But you're holding it up, and that's kind of gay
Ryan, send me a song

you fucking shoe

Quadrochosis · May 07, 2011, 03:34:21 PM

and the men who hold high places
must be the ones to start

oh wait

fuck

jsem · May 07, 2011, 03:37:01 PM

CLOSER TO THE HEAARRTTTT

I destroyed my voice yelling that song along with Geddy and the rest of the arena last nite

ThroughHerEyesDude6 · May 07, 2011, 04:31:19 PM

Newfoundland breaking waves to crash upon a winter
I missed the part where I'm supposed to be so bitter
Amidst a crackling pace I wonder out to see me
For creatures stirring in a wonderous night scene
Black night today and see an arguing couple
For those who wait to find that I am just trouble
Dawn of the killing fields bloodlust and yet so fragile
In death I had to face the bonds of denial
For I was looking to the sky
And so I had to leave to hear this wonderous story
Na-na-na-na

AcidLameLTE · May 07, 2011, 04:57:01 PM

Quote from: dtismajesty on May 07, 2011, 11:47:01 AM
Ryan, won't you send a song
So my roulette can just move on along
I'm not going to lie, I fucking hate this game
Almost as much as my DTF username
and I want to get it done and out of my way
But you're holding it up, and that's kind of gay
Ryan, send me a song

you fucking shoe

Nice

ClairvoyantCat · May 07, 2011, 06:12:46 PM

So here I was
Waltzing along to my favorite tune
in some desert in Africa
Then, out of nowhere
A walrus appeared

and he did the mash
he did the walrus mash
he mashed about
this and that
here and there
near and far

it was the walrus mash

and I never felt closer to god

mrjazzguitar · May 07, 2011, 08:03:40 PM

why didn't this thread exist when I had to write 5 poems a week for poetry class...

Kosmo · May 08, 2011, 12:19:48 AM

A Duck With Swagger

Yo
I'm a duck
You better
Get outta my face
Yo ...bro
---
Swagger
That i have
More than the
emperor of Madagascar
---
I'm a duck
You see?

ThroughHerEyesDude6 · May 10, 2011, 04:02:22 PM

And so I sit
looking at the window
I see the mice scramble
they are looking for answers

and so I comfort myself
still staring out the window
bright colors to pass me by
boxes and boxes without wheels

So still I am planted
hearing the sounds outside
a steady beat of earthly tempos
they all sound the same

Yet again I ground myself
Glaring out the window
I sure hope it's nice out there
Cause here it's too real

sonatafanica · May 10, 2011, 04:05:15 PM

FUCK
I mean
god damn
shit's always so
like
whatever man
UGH
stress all over
people won't get off my dick about shit
fuck
I mean it's days like this when
I consider that maybe
Hitler was onto something

ZBomber · May 10, 2011, 04:07:54 PM

I find that poem horribly offensive.

I can't believe you didn't capitalize "God".

ClairvoyantCat · May 10, 2011, 04:10:25 PM

At least he capitalized Hilter...

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